This is one of my writing tasks that I did last week. We had to make a better sentence then the door slammed. It was fun but mostly hard for some people, especially me. I think I did well on making a better sentence than The door slammed. I think I could improve on getting more interesting words for my sentence. Have you ever done this kind of writing task?
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ReplyDeletehello Robert, great job next time you could maybe space out all of your categories so it is easier to read and understand it, other than that Ka pai and kakete.
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